Didn't see this posted and it really doesn't say anything new, but figured it's a article to pass the time before the game tonight... Yao soars, but undermanned Rockets sink, from MSNBC Stuart
The content is fine, but this piece is awfully written. Jeesh. Inconsistent voice, no structure, and some embarrassing constructions.
Don't get me started on him! (btw -- my writing certainly isn't any better than this article...but then again, I'm not getting paid to write for MSNBC. just like i can rip Boggans for not hitting a 3 even though I couldn't drain one to save my life.)
i agree, the article just doesn't flow nicely together. i've written better stuff on a 1 1/2 hour deadline. obviously this guy had more time than that to put this together, it's not a time sensative piece. did they just hire this guy right out of college or what? there are people on the staff at the student paper i work at that put better stuff together than this. it's blogesque.