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[photography] critique thread

Discussion in 'BBS Hangout' started by thegary, Jan 10, 2012.

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  1. no_answer

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    Swoly hasn't hit this up yet? What what!
     
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  2. thegary

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    seems we have a lot of people on here more interested in talking about camera gear than about photography. ;)
     
    #62 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  3. s land balla

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    [​IMG]

    Mumbai, India. // A dhobi (laundryman) at Dhobi Ghat, the largest outdoor laundromat in the world. There was also a recent Bollywood movie that took place here.
     
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  4. thegary

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    ^nice
     
    #64 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  5. s land balla

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    Thanks. Here's a portrait I did of a little kid in Kashmir, Pakistan:

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    More of my travel pictures here :): http://swagistani.tumblr.com
     
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  6. MoonDogg

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    Does that cause you undue stress?
     
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  7. thegary

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    yes it does, that's why i put a winkie smilie. :rolleyes:
     
    #67 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  8. Yonkers

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    This had potential but I have a couple of issues with it.
    The biggest one is that it is not in focus. And secondly the other kid shows up so bright as to distract.
     
    #68 Yonkers, Jan 13, 2012
  9. JayZ750

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    I agree with Yonkers comments.

    That said, your tumblr website was great, and a ton of really great shots in there.
     
    #69 JayZ750, Jan 13, 2012
  10. macalu

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    i like this one but it needs to be more in focus.
     
    #70 macalu, Jan 13, 2012
  11. thegary

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    [​IMG]
     
    #71 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  12. Sajan

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    a lot of ur pics are not in focus..
     
    #72 Sajan, Jan 13, 2012
  13. bnb

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    thanks for the tumblr link SLballa. You'd posted that here before, I think, and I was about to ask for it again. Some really great stuff.
     
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  14. thegary

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    maybe not but i do appreciate that he really is getting in the middle of things.
     
    #74 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  15. macalu

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    he's got composition down (to this amatuer eye at least) but improvement on his focus would go a long way. it seems like a consistent issue that could easily be corrected. it takes away from what otherwise might have been a great pic(s).
     
    #75 macalu, Jan 13, 2012
  16. bnb

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    He needs to channel his inner Hakeem. He needs to Fokass.
     
    #76 bnb, Jan 13, 2012
  17. thegary

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    i really don't know what it means to "have composition down."
    anyways, better to get the shot out of focus than not at all.
     
    #77 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  18. Bandwagoner

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    that seems pretty obvious from your photos
     
    #78 Bandwagoner, Jan 13, 2012
  19. thegary

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    [​IMG]
     
    #79 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
  20. thegary

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    CaseyH the pedantic troll, LOL
     
    #80 thegary, Jan 13, 2012
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