Just checking on the blog again, and it seems like the same missteps are taking place. Grammar and punctuation are spotty, including an incorrect use of "dominate" where it should be "dominant" (a pet peeve of mine). Honestly, if you're already about to leave high school with this level of writing, then it might be a little late to try and correct a lot of it unless you're really willing to put in the work. I'm really not trying to be harsh...just honest. I think it might be best for you to get a friend who is both honest and very particular about grammar and punctuation and just have them read your stuff before you post it. Sort of like an editor, but free of charge. I think it would do wonders for the blog.
Thats rediculous. Your not making any cents. I definately disagree. You should just except his blog the way it is. I dont think he will loose any readers.
