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In love with a heroine addict.

Discussion in 'BBS Hangout' started by T-mac&Yao=RING, Jan 27, 2009.

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  1. T-mac&Yao=RING

    T-mac&Yao=RING Member

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    I bet you hate you don't have the power to put me at rookie again don't you?
     
    #21 T-mac&Yao=RING, Jan 27, 2009
  2. Another Brother

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    oh. thk god. ;)
     
    #22 Another Brother, Jan 27, 2009
  3. twhy77

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    Oh, in that case, it is absolute rubbish. Or is that Ruggish?
     
    #23 twhy77, Jan 27, 2009
  4. BrieflySpeaking

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    Good luck dude. Ignore these guys crying over Italics. Big deal.
     
    #24 BrieflySpeaking, Jan 27, 2009
  5. Bullard4Life

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    I think that's an awesome idea, especially the title, so evocative of the purpose of the collection. If a publisher doesn't believe in it, you shouldn't be afraid to put a substantial portion of your personal savings into publishing it. All great artists have to take risks.
     
    #25 Bullard4Life, Jan 27, 2009
  6. drumbum

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    Oh man...

    You're too cruel...
     
    #26 drumbum, Jan 27, 2009
  7. T-mac&Yao=RING

    T-mac&Yao=RING Member

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    Thanks. And they can cry all they want I'm not going to stop.
     
    #27 T-mac&Yao=RING, Jan 27, 2009
  8. BrieflySpeaking

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    your next post will be 2k, in Italics :cool:
     
    #28 BrieflySpeaking, Jan 27, 2009
  9. moestavern19

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    Please post more poems like the one you just did.

    The world needs laughter.
     
    #29 moestavern19, Jan 27, 2009
  10. T-mac&Yao=RING

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    So the poem sucked that bad? Or is it the italics that makes you mad?
     
    #30 T-mac&Yao=RING, Jan 27, 2009
  11. RedRowdy111

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    So....you stick it in a crackhead? Gross.
     
    #31 RedRowdy111, Jan 27, 2009
  12. moestavern19

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    I think your poem made Fall Out Boy lyrics look like T.S. Eliot.
     
    #32 moestavern19, Jan 27, 2009
  13. Cannonball

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    This was a better poem than the first one.
     
    #33 Cannonball, Jan 27, 2009
  14. Trip

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    Good idea with the subject. I dabble with poetry a bit and wish I came up with that.

    That said though, you seem to want to stay within conventional poetry but then your line lengths and rhythm seem all over the place. Maybe get rid of rhyming and go free verse?
     
    #34 Trip, Jan 27, 2009
  15. fmullegun

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    my dream girl is a 19 year old redhead from UK with a heroine addiction.

    Wish I could find someone like that, id get a divorce for sho!
     
    #35 fmullegun, Jan 27, 2009
  16. gwatson86

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    No really, that thing isn't suitable to wipe my ass. I couldn't make it all the way through, it was so horrible.

    Read some real poetry, not Dr. Seuss.
     
    #36 gwatson86, Jan 27, 2009
  17. Mr. Brightside

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    Is this rap lyrics? I think you should post this in that other thread.
     
    #37 Mr. Brightside, Jan 27, 2009
  18. macalu

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    reading that poem made me want to overdose.
     
    #38 macalu, Jan 27, 2009
  19. KingCheetah

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    Rookie

    Clutch, it's time.
     
    #39 KingCheetah, Jan 27, 2009
  20. Franchise3

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    ^^^

    +1.
     
    #40 Franchise3, Jan 27, 2009
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