Ok clutchfans I want yall to tell me what yall think about my quotes I make up myself. I really put a lot of thinking into them. They say the best things in life are free if thats true why am I only happy whan I have money. -Me Life is hard death is easy I spit the truth so please believe me look at what you go through and no matter what you do people still gone hate you -Me The Great Depression. It feels like 1929 all over again -Me Life is like baseball 3 strikes and you're out but its a lil bit harder becasue you're only up to bet once -Me
Stop posting in italics and use proper grammar if you are going to ask people to evaluate your sayings.
things are so much easier to read when you use punctuation.. at least SOME punctuation! It's the internet, but don't ignore it completely. edit: also, "spit the truth" is overused in rap.. so I think that makes your 2nd one lose any value it might have had
The first one is the worst one. It's just a rip off of the old "Whoever said money can't buy happiness must have been poor." Or my wife's favorite "Whoever said the best things in life are free never had diamonds." (I kid about it being my wife's favorite. She's never said it. Verbally.)
I'll stop being so hard on your grammar. Anyway, the expressions aren't very good. The first just isn't original at all. The second is...well...I mean it's just a rap song line. The third is meaningless. I don't even get what you are trying to convey by using those two sentences. The last one has potential if you used correct grammar and tinkered with the words a little. All in all, the says are not good but one has potential, you need to try to learn punctuation, and italics suck.
Not deep at all. Stop posting in italics. It's not that hard. In fact, it's less work if you DON'T post in italics. It's one less button to press.
