I missed the Iowa speech, but my impression, like the writer's, has been he generally eschews generic attacks on republicans. So when he goes off message it make one wonder whether this is the real Obama, and perhaps there is something to concerns about his most liberal of senate voting records. [rquoter]Obama Unplugged Lost without a Teleprompter. by Dean Barnett 02/12/2008 12:00:00 AM USUALLY WHEN BARACK OBAMA gives a major speech, the overdone hosannas from the liberal commentariat follow as surely as night follows day. The American Prospect's Ezra Klein wrote of Obama's post-Iowa victory speech, "I've been blessed to hear many great orations. I was in the audience when Howard Dean gave his famous address challenging the Democratic Party to rediscover courage and return to principle . . . But none achieve(d) quite what Obama, at his best, creates. . . . Obama's finest speeches do not excite. They do not inform. They don't even really inspire. They elevate. They enmesh you in a grander moment." It would be unfair to say this childish lefty gushing has been without cause. Obama is indeed a magnificent speaker. A few days after his Iowa address, I emailed a friend of mine and called it the finest political speech I had ever heard. Then again, I cannot claim to have been in the audience for Howard Dean's "famous address." In spite of Obama's obvious strengths in this area, questions linger regarding Obama's gifted speechifying. Do his speeches give us a glimpse at a very special man with a unique vision? Or are we merely witnessing a political one-trick pony? Yes, Obama can turn a phrase better and do more with a Teleprompter than any other modern era politician. But does his special skill set here actually mean anything, or is it instead the political equivalent of a dog walking on its hind legs--unusual and riveting, but not especially significant? Regardless, the liberal commentators have gushed their praise nearly every time Obama has opened his mouth before a Teleprompter the past few months It was thus interesting to see Obama climb to the stage at Virginia's Jefferson-Jackson Dinner on Saturday night. As he strode to the podium, Obama clutched in his hands a pile of 3 by 5 index cards. The index cards meant only one thing--no Teleprompter. Shorn of his Teleprompter, we saw a different Obama. His delivery was halting and unsure. He looked down at his obviously copious notes every few seconds throughout the speech. Unlike the typical Obama oration where the words flow with unparalleled fluidity, he stumbled over his phrasing repeatedly. The prepared text for his remarks, as released on his website, sounded a lot like a typical Obama speech. All the Obama dramatis personae that we've come to know so well were there--the hapless family that had to put a "for sale" sign on its front lawn, the factory forced to shutter its doors and, of course, the mother who declares bankruptcy because "she cannot pay her child's medical bills." The tone was also vintage Obama. The prepared text reached out to all Americans, including (gasp!) Republicans. It also evidenced Obama's signature lack of anger. While his colleagues have happily demagogued complex issues and demonized the Bush administration, Obama always has taken pains to strike a loftier tone. But Saturday night's stem-winder turned out quite differently from the typical Obama speech. With no Teleprompter signaling the prepared text, Obama failed to deliver the speech in his characteristically flawless fashion. He had to rely on notes. And his memory. And he improvised. The results weren't just interesting because they revealed Obama as a markedly inferior speaker without the Teleprompter. Obama's supporters have had ample notice that the scripted Obama is far more effective than the spontaneous one. The extremely articulate and passionate Obama that makes all the speeches has yet to show up at any of the debates. For such a gifted and energetic speaker, he is an oddly tongue-tied and indifferent debater. What was especially noteworthy about his Virginia speech were the diversions Obama took from the prepared text. Because of Obama's improvised moments, this speech was different than the usual fare he offers. We didn't get the normal dosages of post-partisanship or even "elevation." Virtually every time Obama deviated from the text, he expressed the partisan anger that has so poisoned the Democratic party. His spontaneous comments eschewed the conciliatory and optimistic tone that has made the Obama campaign such a phenomenon. It looked like the spirit of John Edwards or Howard Dean had possessed Obama every time he vamped. While Paul Krugman probably loved it, this different Obama was a far less attractive one. At one point, Obama launched an improvised jeremiad against the current administration that took special note of the recent revelation that he and Dick Cheney are distant relations: "Now I understand some of the excitement doesn't have to do with me. I know that whatever else happens whatever twists and turns this campaign may take, when you go into that polling place next November, the name George Bush won't be on the ballot and that makes everybody pretty cheerful. Everyone's happy about that. The name of my cousin Dick Cheney won't be on the ballot. That was embarrassing when that news came out. When they do these genealogical surveys, you want to be related to somebody cool. So, but, his name went be on the ballot. "Each of us running for the Democratic nomination agrees on one thing that the other party does not--that the next president must end the disastrous policies of George W. Bush. No more Scooter Libby Justice! No more Brownie incompetence! No more Karl Rove politics." None of this was in the prepared text. And all of it was a marked departure from the kind of successful campaign that Obama has run. One can imagine Obama, if he thought things through more fully, using the revelation regarding Cheney as an occasion to note something vapidly uplifting like how in America, we're all part of the same family. Looking past the missed opportunity regarding the vice president, how many times has Obama deliberately pushed angry-left hot buttons like Scooter Libby and Karl Rove? Obama has run looking to the future, and thus hasn't felt it necessary to dwell on the purported horrors that the Bush administration has visited upon the nation. This tack has made him look above the fray. Other improvised moments also contradicted the generally lofty tone of the Obama campaign. At one, point when addressing what we have to do for the economy, Obama ad-libbed, "The insurance and the drug companies aren't going to give up their profits easily . . . Exxon Mobil made $11 billion this past quarter." This is the kind of empty class warfare shtick that earned John Edwards an early exit from the race. What's more, it displayed the kind of simplistic sloganeering that Obama had previously eschewed. Obama's shot at Exxon Mobil's profits is strikingly disingenuous. He seems to be implicitly saying that the healthy earnings are good news for Mr. Exxon and Mr. Mobil, who will promptly stash most of the profits underneath their obviously outsized mattresses. The two will then likely invest the remainder in foreign sweatshops that will facilitate the outsourcing of even more American jobs. Of course, who benefits from corporate earnings is a slightly complex matter, and thus vulnerable to simplistic demagoguery. Just ask John Edwards. But Barack Obama is far too intelligent to not realize that many of the school teachers and union workers and working moms that so often people his more elegant speeches likely have an interest in Exxon Mobil's profits either from their retirement plan's portfolio or their union's holdings or their own investments that they actively manage. The implied notion that corporate profits matter only to the corporations in question is risibly counterfactual. Worse still was the threat to take away the profits of the drug and insurance companies. Perhaps Obama thinks that the drug companies will continue to develop life saving therapies out of benevolence, and that their employees will happily take the pay cuts that will accompany the loss of profits. This is yet another simplistic piece of us-against-them politicking, the kind of thing that Obama has reliably eschewed--at least when he's on script. What makes Obama's Jefferson-Jackson speech especially relevant is where he went when he went off script. The unifying Obama who has impressed so many people during this campaign season vanished, replaced by just another angry liberal railing against George W. Bush, Karl Rove, Exxon Mobil, and other long standing Democratic piƱatas. The pressing question that Obama's decidedly uninspiring Jefferson-Jackson oratory raises is which Obama is the real Obama--the one who read beautifully crafted words from a Teleprompter after his victory in Iowa, or the tediously angry liberal who improvised in Virginia? Dean Barnett is a staff writer at THE WEEKLY STANDARD. [/rquoter]
He says this **** all the time. Definitely not a "marked departure..." Dean Barnett should pay more attention to the campaign if he wants to write about it.
This is all nitpicking. Naturally, if you're supporting either Obama or Clinton, you want a change from George W. Bush, his staff, and the politics that have come to define his era. This is a primary season - he's playing to the base. And the truth of the matter is, if you still support George W. Bush, Dick Cheney, etc. you won't be voting for whoever the Democratic candidate is this time around. And truthfully, who cares if his speech was written on either a teleprompter or notecards? I've read off of both numerous times and I can say that reading off of a teleprompter is far easier than notecards. Just because the method is different should not take away from the fact that Obama is the most gifted speaker in the race and one of the most gifted we've seen in decades? Do we expect him to remember it off the top of his head? And did what he said off the top of his head really surprise anybody? Not me, and I plan on voting for him. At least the author admits that Obama's Iowa speech was one of the best in recent memory. However, to nitpick his delivery on a given night, after 8 years of stumbling, bumbling George Bush deliveries, is nitpicking. This article is the type that is typical of both sides in today's politics - desperately trying to find something worth criticism that in the long run, really has no weight whatsoever.
remember it's a conservative outlet, and remember that obama is appealing to a lot of republicans and independents precisely because he doesn't (usually) succumb to tired leftist tropes about the evil W and lord valdemort. so when he does, it makes one wonder that perhaps he's not really some kinda different after all...
The author beautifully articulated what the rational amongst us know to be true. Perfect wording above.
Yeah, I've heard a lot of this before multiple times - especially the Cheney family references. I didn't hear much of the speech, but I posted an article in one of the other threads that indicated that he might be adding more substance to the hope stuff. Interesting viewpoint, though. On the debate side - I don't think he's necessarily a bad debater, but Hillary is very good at that side of things so it's hard to say. He definitely gets outshined in the debate setting.
His whole campaign is based upon the motto of "Change." What exactly do you think that "Change" is implying? As people have remarked, 70% of the country has an unfavorable view of George Bush's. Nearly all Democrats do as well. Obama may have the same view toward Bush as every Democrat in the race, but what he represents is a break from the politics that Clinton and Bush helped define. Of course he's going to reference what we're all tired of. Now, when he mentions Voldemort in a speech, then I'll know that he's gone off of the deep end. However, it's nothing new for any Democrat to criticize George Bush. They probably would not be an electable Democrat if they did not (ask Joe Lieberman, a new Independent). Once again, he's not trying to appeal to the ultra-conservative author of this piece, as he's probably beyond the realm of Republicans that are willing to come over to Obama's side. However, anybody who is even thinking of supporting him should know that he's not a fan of W's.
He is appealing to some Independents and Republicans merely since he is not a Republican. There is what he the candidate says and there is why some voters are not voting Republican this time out. These are not the same thing for all cases. BTW, this is the exception (Obama criticizing W) that makes the rule.
The author hasn't been following the democrat race very much. Obama has, on many occasions, criticized the Bush administration's failed policies heavily. Watch any of the debates, even early in the campaign. Criticizing the failings of the Bush administration is not an angry liberal argument. It's a 70% of the country argument. If you think that only the far left is unhappy with Bush and his team, take a look at his approval ratings. Obama has given credit to many republicans- Romney for his health plan, Arnold for his efforts on global warming, Regan and the republican party of the 80's being "the party of ideas." If you follow Obama's campaign you know it is anything but hateful. It's hopeful. The rallying cries are pro-active epithets like "yes we can." The push of the campaign has nothing to do with hate or anger. Obama supporters want him to win more than they want anybody else to lose. If you want a guy that ran on Bush hate, check out Kerry or Dean back on 04. I, for one, most certainly voted more against bush than for Kerry. The author admits that Obama's Iowa speech is the greatest he has ever heard, then tries somehow to transform Obama's strength into a weakness by saying that it's false- it's something only given by a teleprompter. Take away that, and it's all just typical liberal hate. Uh... put that same teleprompter in front of anyone, ANYONE, and see if they can do the same thing. Obama wrote his own speech, by the way. He is able to orate in his inspiring manner because he BELIEVES what he is saying. Obama's criticism of Bush isn't hate mongering, it's common sense. And he always criticizes the policies, not the people themselves. The Cheney comment was hilarious, a lot of other people would have used the opportunity to really rip on him. Obama has been doing this for months, it's not like Virginia suddenly revealed a new man, if you've been following for long.
Psshhh. Criticizing Bush isn't just some en vogue liberal shtick, it's what 70% of the country thinks. And that's not due to some vast liberal conspiracy - it's because his policies have been enormous failures.
That's odd. I saw the VA speech in question, and it didn't seem all halted. There were some words misspoken like anyone else has. As others have said the comments the Author of the piece was referring to were things he'd mentioned before and part of his standard stump speech. I think he's sounding more and more presidential, adding some more policy into the vision part of his speeches as the article Major pointed out. He's going after the GOP and Bush in particular to excite the base into getting out and voting. It wasn't personal against Bush, but a condemnation of Bush's policies, and Rove's politics. All very appropriate on target, and on message.
I amazed at people who supported George Bush's lack of grasp of the english language and turn around and try to use obama's articulate way of speaking against him. I guess you guys prefer nucaler
To be fair, basso has on occasion criticized Jr's oratory skills. But yes, the irony abounds from the likes of Mr. Barnett
I feel like this is the 1,000th time it has been mentioned on this BBS, but.... George W Bush is not running for re-election. John McCain is not GWB. Ask Rush Limbaugh, Sean Hannity, and Ann Coulter. The libs will attempt to link McCain to GWB, but that's simply a hollow argument, given their many disagreements and confrontations over the years. And anyone who says they are voting for Obama or Clinton because they 'aren't W' or because they 'hate W' just is an ignoramus. That's a false choice.
no we're just pointing your irony, i've seen you defend george's bush's lack of speaking ability and don't deny it because you felt the need to respond.
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