Little help checking for proofreading errors, browser glitches, etc... http://www.tworoadsmedia.com/ You guys make great beta testers. The text is still being re-written but it's pretty close. Thanks as always.
On the staff page, under Clutch's description, you have "formiddable"...I believe there is only one "d"
In fact, the entire sentence is not quite right: His skill as a database specialist and web developer are formiddable "skill" is singular, but you use the plural "are"....should be "skills" OR "is"
Jeff this is by far the cleanest site you've designed yet! I like the thud sounds when you cross the mouse over the links. I haven't found anything I don't like about it yet, but if I do I'll be sure and...oh hey, I didn't see a "HOME" button when I went to the other pages. Had to back out arrow to "HOME", but thats a no biggie. Other than that, superb job!
Thanks. I forgot to link the logo at the top back to the front page. I'll do that. This was very much a team effort between myself, Clutch and rocketeer with Clutch and rocketeer doing the bulk of the work which is why it looks so damn good.
One more thing, if I may (I'm bored today): How about changing "But, the internet is a vast space with a myriad of different disciplines needed to take it from confusing to usable" to But the internet is a vast space needing a myriad of different disciplines to take it from confusing to usable Or better still, change needing to requiring Just a suggestion.
Good suggestion. Like I said, the text isn't done yet. It is going to be edited a lot over the next couple of days. I'll keep that one in mind.
On the Web Solutions page, "dissemenating" is spelled wrong. The second e should be an i Told you I was bored today!
beautiful job again!!! under Clutch's bio... The site recieves - - i before e except after c BRUTAL - We create a master plan that provides you with everything you will need to have a website that impresses your customers and embarrasses your competition.
The pay phone picture in the contact area.........was there an alternative image that was contemplated? Mango
On the same page as my last post: This sentence under Pre Development is awkward: In the pre-development phase, we assemble our team and meet with the you to determine your needs
Another nit-picky suggestion: take the 'different' out completely. The word 'myriad' already has the connotation of "many and varied" so I think 'different' is a tad redundant. Nothing grammatically incorrect, just a matter of preference.
Atheists and others may be offended by the term 'God-send' to describe Dave Cebrero. (Perhaps 'supreme being-send' or 'nature-send)
Behad: Thanks for all the proofreading. Mrs JB is the expert on writing, not me. Notice no errors from the company.html page - the one she did. rockHEAD: I fogot about the "brutal" sentence. That won't stay. I was actually writing that around 3am and was out of my mind! Mango: I actually like that photo! deepellum: Thanks for the suggestion. As always, guys, thanks so much.
