...is still in the works. I write for entertainment, and I've decided to do a Tolkienesque fantasy sort of thing. Right now, I've got 45 pages... it's pretty rough, and I'm going to be making major revisions soon, I hope. Anyway, I'd post the thing as an attatchment, but it's like 200k in pdf. I'm not sure if I should post something that big, so I'll just e-mail it to anyone who's interested. I'd like suggestions, if you guys have any. Thanks in advance to anyone who actually decides to wade through all of it.
Ummm... I don't know how to do attatchments on the forum's e-mail thingy. Just post your e-mail here, please. Edit: I've sent you a copy, CriscoKidd
Hook me up keith@lighthouseconsultants.net I promise to provide you with my most constructive criticism Thx, Otto
I've sent you a copy. Thanks again to everyone who is taking the time to read my stuff, unpolished as it is. Anywho, I'm turning in... if anyone else wants my masterpiece, you'll have to wait til tomorrow Wow, doing a reply for every person is really spiking my # of posts.
Drex - You might want to start off with an action sequence before you introduce so many different names to the reader. Pretty cool though.