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My stand up comedy show at my law school talent show

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  1. Yonizzel

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    #1 Yonizzel, Apr 7, 2012
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    I'm mid way through this, it's really not bad at all. There are a lot of funny parts and crowd seems to be in it most of the time. However, you MUST work on your delivery. Too many "umms" and some slightly stuttering at times. Also, why did you bring notes? Come on dude, that's like a guy going to a freestyle rap contest with battle lines. Bottom line: 8/10; Thumbs up.
     
    #2 Medicine N Music, Apr 7, 2012
  3. Yonizzel

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    Thanks for the feedback! I definitely gotta work on the ums... I had to do it with notes because with all of the time I spend studying for class, I don't have time to memorize all the lines.. now if I was a full time comedian it would be a little different! Are you in law school? and if not, do you still find the jokes funny?
     
    #3 Yonizzel, Apr 7, 2012
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    The Jew is a funny.
     
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  5. Yonizzel

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    very naas
     
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    seems like an awkward joke coming from a Muslim.
     
    #6 Bandwagoner, Apr 7, 2012
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    you were great! did you get laid that night?

    Us lessor talented people need to know.

    also...a lot of the law school humor went right over my head.

    seriously, though...well done.
     
    #7 heypartner, Apr 7, 2012
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    I love the Jews.
     
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    The title of the thread alone made me chuckle :

    "My stand up comedy show at my law school talent show"

    Bwahaha. :)
     
    #9 Dr of Dunk, Apr 7, 2012
  10. Yonizzel

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    I plead the 5th.

    Thank you.
     
    #10 Yonizzel, Apr 7, 2012
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    Which for those of you who don't know means I don't have to tell you what happened that night!
     
    #11 Yonizzel, Apr 8, 2012
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    Bc all Muslims despise Jews. Amirite?
     
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    No, it just means you would incriminate yourself if you did tell us.
     
    #13 rimrocker, Apr 8, 2012
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    so what happened that night?!
     
    #14 TheChosenOne, Apr 8, 2012
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    I don't know if it's the Holocaust or the other 1,500 years of bloody, violent, Christian anti-Semitism before it, but something about this comment seems off.
     
    #15 Dairy Ashford, Apr 8, 2012
  16. Yonizzel

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    Wow this went from a comedy show to a jews v muslim thread... never meant for that to happen
     
    #16 Yonizzel, Apr 9, 2012
  17. s land balla

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    LOL, me neither.
     
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    me either. just said the comment seems awkward. I blame sammy and p0uche.
     
    #18 Bandwagoner, Apr 9, 2012
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    Didn't know DaDakota was an Emcee at your school. :eek:

    Well, congrats, DD.
     
    #19 SwoLy-D, Apr 9, 2012
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    HAHAHA I did not even think of that!
     
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