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just a poem about men...

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  1. verse

    verse Member

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    why the caged boy sings...



    Behind a man's hands
    A man's eyes
    A man's tongue
    And a man's lies

    Sits a shivering nappy headed boy
    Sitting Indian-style
    Sitting, rocking, shivering while
    Fuzzy flashlight eyes in corners stare
    Sitting, rocking, shivering while
    Scant noises surrounding scare
    the Devil out of him.

    Scary noises from voices he hears
    But has not comprehended in years
    Scary noises from ghosts and demons
    So reverberating the walls within
    Shaking little boys to shivering, trickling tears

    Behind a man's coldness
    Behind a man's bitterness
    A man's polygamous ways
    ...extramarital forays

    Sits a teenage boy scared of rejection
    Sits a teenage boy with his newly found erection
    Sits a teenage boy with Blowpop coated lips
    Sits a teenage boy...wet dreams and desires to part women's hips

    Scary feelings he doesn't understand
    Scary notions of what it's like to be a man
    Scary premonitions of no fatherly figure positions
    Never figured to or bothered

    Just dropped his seed and offered
    Illusions
    Delusions
    Ultimately creating confusions.

    Alone...
    In his cage...
    Surrounded by his rage...

    Big black buck on the outside
    Trembling doe on the inside
    Gladiator to the masses
    horny, shivering, rocking, nappy headed boy trickling tears as the thunder passes...

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    note from verse: people wonder why men do the things we do...i think that captures a great deal of it
     
  2. heypartner

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    the part about "parting women's hips" gave me a boner.
     
  3. JohnnyBlaze

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    Speaking of poems, one of my favourites. Are you a man?


    If

    If you can keep your head when all about you
    Are losing theirs and blaming it on you;
    If you can trust yourself when all men doubt you,
    But make allowance for their doubting too;
    If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
    Or, being lied about, don't deal in lies,
    Or, being hated, don't give way to hating,
    And yet don't look too good, nor talk too wise;

    If you can dream - and not make dreams your master;
    If you can think - and not make thoughts your aim;
    If you can meet with triumph and disaster
    And treat those two imposters just the same;
    If you can bear to hear the truth you've spoken
    Twisted by knaves to make a trap for fools,
    Or watch the things you gave your life to broken,
    And stoop and build 'em up with wornout tools;

    If you can make one heap of all your winnings
    And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
    And lose, and start again at your beginnings
    And never breath a word about your loss;
    If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
    To serve your turn long after they are gone,
    And so hold on when there is nothing in you
    Except the Will which says to them: "Hold on";

    If you can talk with crowds and keep your virtue,
    Or walk with kings - nor lose the common touch;
    If neither foes nor loving friends can hurt you;
    If all men count with you, but none too much;
    If you can fill the unforgiving minute
    With sixty seconds' worth of distance run -
    Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it,
    And - which is more - you'll be a Man my son!

    By Rudyard Kipling
     
  4. verse

    verse Member

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    yes...Kipling is great. and that would make you the "ultimate man"
     
  5. Holden

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    turn on the radio
    nah,
    **ck it..
    turn it off
    fear is your only god,
    on the radio.
    nah...
    **ck it
    turn it off
     

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