Props to you guys for trying, I got nothing but respect for those who try to express themselves artistically. I love rap/hiphop but have never felt the "down south" scene except for Scarface, Outkast, FatPat and few others. The thing about the industry these days (for the most part) is people are making music with the sole aim of making $$$ and becoming famous rather than expressing the state of their environment, culture, society, inner demons, etc. Hip-Hop/rap (all music for that matter) is at its best is when it is pure and straight from the heart and expressing your soul, not creating something to cater to record labels, critics, your homies, your hood, etc.
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Jiveman2 : Mnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. Stewardess : Can I get you something? Jiveman2 : S'mo fo butter layin' to the bone. Jackin' me up. Tightly. Stewardess : I'm sorry I don't understand. Jiveman1 : Cutty say he cant hang. June Cleaver : Oh stewardess, I speak jive. Stewardess : Ohhhh, good. June Cleaver : He said that he's in great pain and he wants to know if you can help him. Stewardess : Would you tell him to just relax and I'll be back as soon as I can with some medicine. June Cleaver : Jus' hang loose blooood. She goonna catch up on the rebound a de medcide. Jiveman2 : What it is big mamma, my mamma didn't raise no dummy, I dug her rap. June Cleaver : Cut me som' slac' jak! Chump don wan no help, chump don git no help. Jive ass dude don got no brains anyhow.
Your brother looks like a math tutor. Song sounds like the same ol stuff that is put out everyday, nothing unique. I like the music better than the rapping. Can you just play the music and you guys juggle or something?