My Demo Tape- check it out!

That's a relief.

 

Not bad. Definitely better than any track I could've come up with at 14.

 

Better than Lil Wayne

 

nice. you spit hot fire man.

 

lol, better then anything I could come up with now. keep it up

 

If you're actually 14 that's really impressive. Your delivery and keeping in line with the beat is good you should keep it up. Also, shoutout for being Pakistani.

 

You're no Youth Lagoon

 

Is diggy Simmons your rival?

 

You'll never live up to Nabeel "The Real Deal"

Jk, sounds good to me. Don't listen to rap at all though.

 

Better than any THING i could've come up with at 14. Except masturbation. I was always a pro at masturbation.

 

Damn good for 14. Work hard expanding your vocabulary and building songs based on something other than how ill or chill you are. I've always thought the best kind of songwriter can captivate an audience with a story the way that Bob Dylan, Conor Oberst, and hell even Kanye does.

Also, it's good to have influences.. but they don't all have to be rappers. Be yourself, make your own style. If you believe in yourself and have confidence in what you're doing it will show in your work. What will make you stand out is being original, not copying the style of some mainstream rapper.

 

Dig that "You Know Me" track, your voice fits that emotional, laid back beat. Think you'd do well with Curren$y-esque beats, that's how I see you after these two tracks.

You workin on a mixtape? Upload it to Datpiff and give us a link so we can hype it. :grin:

 

I don't like rap and I only listened to the 2nd track, but you seem to do a very good job. I'm impressed especially since you're only 14.

 

not bad and yes better than lil wayne. stick with it. you might actually get somewhere in 4 years.