Actually I started to lose focus in the end and now see a couple of grammar mistakes I missed. Embarrassing.
This writing is pretty terrible for an adult, and I hope for your sake it was a joke. If it's not, my honest suggestion is to try your hand at something else.
Glen, your first mistake was trying to boast about your first published work on clutchfans. Your second mistake was not proof-reading.
You're kind of a disgrace to modern journalism. But if Jerome Solomon can make a living doing it, I'd say you've still got a decent shot at it.
