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  1. Warheart

    Warheart Member

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    Been in the writing mood lately and need some constructive criticism. I'm definitely not a singer and these would actually be the first time recording vocals for me. So here is what I've been working on lately...





    Let me know what you guys think
    And if there are any guitar aficionados out there I have more guitar videos on my Instagram at aaron_aguirre90
     
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  2. Warheart

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    Very nice stuff! You need a time machine to go back about 40 years. :)
     
  4. Derp McFlopsky

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    It's cool stuff but turn the hi-hat down for the love of jeebus. A lot. Idk if that's drowning out the vocals but they could use a boost, too muddy in the mix.

    I like the songs though
     
  5. Warheart

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    I know nothing of drums so all I do is transfer the guitar pro midi into a vst and call it a day lol I also know nothing on recording, all songs were on the whim recorded through the mic on my phone
     
  6. Derp McFlopsky

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    honestly i'd have rather heard no hats than have them dominate like that!

    just do a guitar/voice track. trust me. i'm a doctor!
     
  7. Warheart

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    Noted! Thanks doctor for the prescription
     
  8. CometsWin

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    Hey Little Hummingbird has the most potential to me. Overall, sad to say the vocals seem off key a little too often and the music seems a bit jumbled. I heard like a blip of a sixties type sound like The Animals and then like a brooding kind of theme. Perhaps still searching for your sound?

    Props for putting yourself out there though. Takes guts. ;)
     
  9. Warheart

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    Yeah I'm more of a guitarist and vocals is definitely not my forte. Sound wise I'm still exploring, I'm mostly into metal so writing in a different genre is foreign to me
     
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