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Discussion in 'BBS Hangout' started by Warheart, Jul 10, 2017.

  1. Warheart

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    Been in the writing mood lately and need some constructive criticism. I'm definitely not a singer and these would actually be the first time recording vocals for me. So here is what I've been working on lately...





    Let me know what you guys think
    And if there are any guitar aficionados out there I have more guitar videos on my Instagram at aaron_aguirre90
     
    #1 Warheart, Jul 10, 2017
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    #2 Warheart, Jul 11, 2017
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    Very nice stuff! You need a time machine to go back about 40 years. :)
     
    #3 TheFreak, Jul 16, 2017
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    It's cool stuff but turn the hi-hat down for the love of jeebus. A lot. Idk if that's drowning out the vocals but they could use a boost, too muddy in the mix.

    I like the songs though
     
    #4 Dankstronaut, Jul 17, 2017
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    I know nothing of drums so all I do is transfer the guitar pro midi into a vst and call it a day lol I also know nothing on recording, all songs were on the whim recorded through the mic on my phone
     
    #5 Warheart, Jul 17, 2017
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    honestly i'd have rather heard no hats than have them dominate like that!

    just do a guitar/voice track. trust me. i'm a doctor!
     
    #6 Dankstronaut, Jul 17, 2017
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    Noted! Thanks doctor for the prescription
     
    #7 Warheart, Jul 17, 2017
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    Hey Little Hummingbird has the most potential to me. Overall, sad to say the vocals seem off key a little too often and the music seems a bit jumbled. I heard like a blip of a sixties type sound like The Animals and then like a brooding kind of theme. Perhaps still searching for your sound?

    Props for putting yourself out there though. Takes guts. ;)
     
    #8 CometsWin, Jul 18, 2017
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    Yeah I'm more of a guitarist and vocals is definitely not my forte. Sound wise I'm still exploring, I'm mostly into metal so writing in a different genre is foreign to me
     
    #9 Warheart, Jul 18, 2017
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    Just something I’ve been working on, still in rough draft mode
     
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    Final instrumental draft. Constructive criticism is welcomed or any criticism idc haha
     
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    Original song I made a couple of years back, just decided to polish it up a bit. Pretty simple to say the least. I don’t really know much about drums, so I don’t even know if they even sound good lol
     
    #12 Warheart, Feb 2, 2019
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    The first 2 songs are not really my style or what I prefer to listen to. Humming Bird was good. Neo Folk good and reminded me of something you would hear in a movie. I'm Back is really good. I did not really care for the part where it slowed down around the two minute mark. Still it was really good and well deserved the woooo at the end.
     
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    Thanks appreciate any feedback, idk about the wooo at the end I tend to do that a lot at the end of all my videos haha
     
    #14 Warheart, Feb 2, 2019
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    The very first song I wrote years ago, finally got around to record it lol
     
    #15 Warheart, Feb 13, 2019
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    First of all...DAT AXX

    Very 80s heavy metal. I like it!
     
    #16 Dankstronaut, Feb 14, 2019
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    Thanks man, my RR24 used to be my favorite until I put emg57s into this bad girl, now I can’t let her go
     
    #17 Warheart, Feb 14, 2019
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